tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post8018090656484140140..comments2023-12-19T21:26:33.909-05:00Comments on View of Sue: Giant step to the point of no returnSuehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04325183325187518360noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-85758382885757321472012-10-28T04:56:42.931-04:002012-10-28T04:56:42.931-04:00I feel like I just visited the Twilight Zone. Gre...I feel like I just visited the Twilight Zone. Great short story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-89706925117074472392012-10-27T23:06:37.104-04:002012-10-27T23:06:37.104-04:00Anything with some sort of "fringe" scie...Anything with some sort of "fringe" science is a plus with me! Nice twist you have going on there.Alynza Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09912072040743353688noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-67066907316009633362012-10-27T19:31:44.552-04:002012-10-27T19:31:44.552-04:00Oh, I like the twist! Hurry up and finish the book...Oh, I like the twist! Hurry up and finish the book so I can read the whole thing. :-)C R Wardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13212244053084461118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-48932073952830761452012-10-26T15:36:21.772-04:002012-10-26T15:36:21.772-04:00The end came as a complete surprise. Great twist! ...The end came as a complete surprise. Great twist! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06111212491987393873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-7186098538294789372012-10-24T15:34:36.525-04:002012-10-24T15:34:36.525-04:00As others have said, love the twist! Very nicely w...As others have said, love the twist! Very nicely written. I was gripped from the first word to the last :)randi leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14207001299508931034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-88579957224190200172012-10-23T14:10:19.350-04:002012-10-23T14:10:19.350-04:00Diane - Yes there is some scientific recklessness ...Diane - Yes there is some scientific recklessness going on in this novel.<br /><br />hospitaloflife - Glad I could throw you off. Thanks.Suehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04325183325187518360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-49886858576992619052012-10-23T08:01:59.721-04:002012-10-23T08:01:59.721-04:00That was good. I liked it, the ending threw me off...That was good. I liked it, the ending threw me off (in a good way) because I expected something much more "medical" than fantastic. Nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-32414256239012523072012-10-22T16:19:03.880-04:002012-10-22T16:19:03.880-04:00Wonderful twist at the end! I had no idea where it...Wonderful twist at the end! I had no idea where it was going, but all I could think...they did this same sort of recklessness in Jurassic Park! :)<br /><br />Nice job, Sue!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15901684621715980573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-7347708113063708942012-10-22T14:53:32.806-04:002012-10-22T14:53:32.806-04:00wonderactivist - That does sound better. This nove...wonderactivist - That does sound better. This novel is in it's rough draft stage, so any advice is appreciated. Thank you.<br /><br />Thank you Diane!<br /><br />Alan - Yes. There are a series of twists swirling around in my head. I'm waiting to see which one settles in first.Suehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04325183325187518360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-19108724063459123882012-10-22T13:49:57.710-04:002012-10-22T13:49:57.710-04:00An engaging read, Sue! Will future chapters lead t...An engaging read, Sue! Will future chapters lead to remorse, mistrust and a day of reckoning? Nice job pulling the reader in for more.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-53977742157747673732012-10-22T11:20:37.273-04:002012-10-22T11:20:37.273-04:00Ooh, nice twist in the ending!Ooh, nice twist in the ending!Diane Dooleyhttp://dianedooley.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-36282622866757762222012-10-22T01:04:16.484-04:002012-10-22T01:04:16.484-04:00Fun story. I like the feeling of your dangling so...Fun story. I like the feeling of your dangling something in front of me. One sentence didn't read quite right to me: "Immersing themselves in the world of molecular and human genetics, developmental biology and neuroscience who became know as top in their fields."<br /><br />I'm thinking "they became known" but am not certain it's what you wanted. <br /><br />The twist at the end is fun. I like this a lot and think you should expand it a little and sub. wonderactivisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16913898213501673184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-87088841449174939982012-10-22T00:48:09.057-04:002012-10-22T00:48:09.057-04:00Thank you. Glad you liked it and I will certainly ...Thank you. Glad you liked it and I will certainly take you advice orion. Hobo's just can't catch a break when aliens are near. ;-)Suehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04325183325187518360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-26729342821029294182012-10-21T23:20:20.861-04:002012-10-21T23:20:20.861-04:00Nice twist! Seems there's always a hobo scapeg...Nice twist! Seems there's always a hobo scapegoat (hobgoat) around when there's nefarious doings afoot :)<br /><br />Incidentally, I wouldn't capitalize "Molecular and Human Genetics, Developmental Biology and Neuroscience" unless you're talking about university classes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-3288067880583425392012-10-21T17:22:59.688-04:002012-10-21T17:22:59.688-04:00Good ending line, makes me want to read more.Good ending line, makes me want to read more.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14732990670104875171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1901909528750752062.post-170486605980947912012-10-21T15:26:57.527-04:002012-10-21T15:26:57.527-04:00Intriguing twist!Intriguing twist!Hillary Jacqueshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10394482441040531244noreply@blogger.com